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March 20, 2013

Brothers


They rolled about, legs up in the air.
Like cuddly little puppies without a care.
Sniffing each other, pawing each other
A tiny nibble hither and thither. 
Their soft laughter, full of sparkles
Up they go, running in circles
Who is chasing who? you never know
Now is their time, their hearts aglow
Brothers are friends for ever
Alone is what they will be never.


Written for Susan's  Stretching Comparisons at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
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22 comments:

  1. Susan21 March 2013 at 00:16

    Wonderful! In the image of the playful puppies, I get the feeling for the brothers. Sniffing? Hmmm. Pure fun.

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    1. Sini Rachel21 March 2013 at 00:22

      Thank u Susan...they r right in front of me all the time..my 2 sons.

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  2. Kerry O'Connor21 March 2013 at 02:35

    This is a heart-warming poem.

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  3. Prasanna Rao21 March 2013 at 03:00

    Siblings do have a special bond. I remember my brothers hitting each other during their countless scuffles and I was an involuntary audience to their boxing matches

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    1. Sini Rachel21 March 2013 at 04:46

      Oh yes..they cant seem to walk by each other without a punch or a kick

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  4. Anunoy Samanta21 March 2013 at 04:03

    Nicely woven Sini! I can really feel its words... thanks to my brother :)

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    1. Sini Rachel21 March 2013 at 04:47

      thanks...I see this in front of me the whole time..inseparable they are...though at each others throat too

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  5. Wolfsrosebud21 March 2013 at 05:25

    i raised 3 boys... i do believe you got it right

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  6. Unknown21 March 2013 at 08:00

    Ideal! You captured the essence of little boys and puppies most perfectly.
    My four-year old grandson said just this week "I'm a puppy. I'm sniffing you." What a strange coincidence.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/03/20/as-a-river-flowing/

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    1. Sini Rachel21 March 2013 at 09:56

      Wow..your little grandson sounds just like my two boys..thanks for sharing..and thank u for the kind words.

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  7. Ella21 March 2013 at 08:23

    I love the adventure and sense of fun you have captured :D

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  8. Kay L. Davies21 March 2013 at 09:42

    Little boys are indeed like puppies. My brothers are far apart in age, so there was none of that when I grew up, but I can see it in them now, both mature men, sparring with witty words and playful jabs.
    Well done!
    K

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    1. Sini Rachel21 March 2013 at 09:58

      Thank u Kay...they have this bond that unites them against the world..come whatever between them..its always them together versus rest of us...

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  9. Liz21 March 2013 at 10:56

    Very true account of the 2 puppies back @ur place..a happy pome :)

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  10. Helen21 March 2013 at 11:48

    I raised three sons ,,, born in three years ~~ cuddly little puppies describes them to a 'T' ...

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  11. Sabio Lantz21 March 2013 at 15:37

    Ah, I hope my children become these puppies -- friends forever. Nice

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  12. Maude Lynn21 March 2013 at 19:35

    This is so sweet!

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